Entry- Capitalism: A Love Story
Capitalism: A Love Story
I recently watch a documentary on capitalism and how it has affect America. This documentary was really informative and taught me lots of things. I highly recommend it. It shows how secretive the richer people are trying to act. In one part of the movie he tried going up to ask for an interview when he just shut down and the security gets him off the premises. This shows the the companies are willing to hide so the people can not see what they are doing. Whether if it is wrong or not. This showed that the top 1% of the rich controlled most of the financial wealth compared the the 95% who had no say. This showed people getting kicked out of their houses and how they have been struggling while the ones on top just allowed them to be forced out of their homes leaving them with nothing. This makes me incredibly sad because no one should be kicked out of their house and left with nothing just because they were late on a few bills. While the rich get to hide their wealth and are dominating the United State's wealth.
I recently watch a documentary on capitalism and how it has affect America. This documentary was really informative and taught me lots of things. I highly recommend it. It shows how secretive the richer people are trying to act. In one part of the movie he tried going up to ask for an interview when he just shut down and the security gets him off the premises. This shows the the companies are willing to hide so the people can not see what they are doing. Whether if it is wrong or not. This showed that the top 1% of the rich controlled most of the financial wealth compared the the 95% who had no say. This showed people getting kicked out of their houses and how they have been struggling while the ones on top just allowed them to be forced out of their homes leaving them with nothing. This makes me incredibly sad because no one should be kicked out of their house and left with nothing just because they were late on a few bills. While the rich get to hide their wealth and are dominating the United State's wealth.
Pretty good new entries, Madyson. You have some good topics and ideas, but you are still a bit too brief. Develop more. Keep digging both into content and your rhetorical approach. Good tone other than feeling rushed.
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